OK, I know you're over the pity thing, which is good and that your writing is even better. But can I just say that I loved that chapter? Especially the Sev/Lily interaction, that she'd choose such an important time to ask.

And my other point is, you are one of THE best authora I have seen on the net so far. There are are few others that I've seen, but that's only because of the differation of writing styles. Your work is good. I haven't seen a piece of your work that hasn't been written like you've meant it. This person just doesn't see it.

*Jez