Well, this is just silly. It sounds to me like the reviewer was trying to be constructive, not insulting, but...
didn't see the emotion and interaction I normally have seen.
Hmm. I didn't see anything wrong with the emotion or interaction in this last chapter. (of Snake Charming, right?) In fact, the only thing I see wrong with it, is that it doesn't have more of Wesley and Raven Hope and what's going on with those crazy kids ;p (kidding. I do love the possibilities there, though.) I particularly liked the part where Connor went kicking down the door, and what he said to Ron about being without fruit ;D The image of the kids holed up behind a desk, with Wesley watching over them, and Draco and Harry injured as they battle the Slytherins, is nicely dramatic. And the end leaves us with a bit of a question - where did Pansy and her cronies go? Good work, I'm thinking.
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didn't see the emotion and interaction I normally have seen.
Hmm. I didn't see anything wrong with the emotion or interaction in this last chapter. (of Snake Charming, right?) In fact, the only thing I see wrong with it, is that it doesn't have more of Wesley and Raven Hope and what's going on with those crazy kids ;p (kidding. I do love the possibilities there, though.) I particularly liked the part where Connor went kicking down the door, and what he said to Ron about being without fruit ;D The image of the kids holed up behind a desk, with Wesley watching over them, and Draco and Harry injured as they battle the Slytherins, is nicely dramatic. And the end leaves us with a bit of a question - where did Pansy and her cronies go? Good work, I'm thinking.